Friday, 2 January 2026

Snow

 There are two poems about snow that I love. One I'm entirely sure you know already — Robert Frost's Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

The other you may not have come across; Ben Jonson's poem about Charis. That one isn't about snow strictly speaking, it just has a couplet that crops up within the general effusing about the endless charms of Charis. Where he says:  

Ha' you mark'd but the fall o' the snow
Before the soil hath smutch'd it?

I draw it to your attention not only because it is so very evocative — surely every one of us must have marvelled at freshly fallen snow before somebody took the chance to trudge across it in winter boots with the kitchen compost bin — but also because it has that excellent word 'smutch'.

More than once I've had occasion to incorporate that word into fictional prose, only to have an editor argue with me, insisting that there is no such word in the English language. But then being able to say, "Oh, but there is. Ben Jonson put it in a poem in the 16th century" gets you a free pass to include it in any story you like, because every editor knows they should have read Ben Jonson. Pleasing.

And this morning, here on the Sussex coast, snow was falling in soft light flakes before daybreak. I know this is not big news to anyone living in Minnesota and it's not as startling as if it snowed in Dubai, but here in the very south of England we hold our breath every year wondering if it will snow this time. Because some years it does, but most years we have only frost and not all that much of that.

Our Hebe and Alice absolutely love snow. They are the only people I know who don't mind me banging on their door at six o'clock in the morning in the middle of winter just to make them get up and see the snow. I didn't do that today, but as dawn broke we were excitedly messaging each other photos of our respective gardens.

Their cat Miguel had been out frolicking about in it, and came in to gaze on the beauty from the warmth of the sitting room.



And here, a mile down the hill, we had the most glorious sunrise.


And all this — thinking about the endless flowering of beauty across the face of the earth, so matter how grim and dreary the news might be — reminds me of another dearly loved poem (I'm sure you know this one too) by Gerard Manley Hopkins.

The world is charged with the grandeur of God.
    It will flame out, like shining from shook foil;
    It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil
Crushed. Why do men then now not reck his rod?
Generations have trod, have trod, have trod;
    And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;
    And wears man's smudge and shares man's smell: the soil
Is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.

And for all this, nature is never spent;
    There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
And though the last lights off the black West went
    Oh, morning, at the brown brink eastward, springs —
Because the Holy Ghost over the bent
    World broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings.
 

 

11 comments:

  1. What a beautiful and peaceful post. I love the picture of the cat๐Ÿ˜Š We have a lot of snow here and something that makes me stop in my tracks with the deep snow we get is the silence and stillness it creates on days when it’s not windy. Some days it’s so still it feels like a different world. The snow is just below my knees in our yard, deeper in areas where it’s drifted. We have a large wooded backyard that looks like a winter wonderland which our kitchen window overlooks. I wish I could post a few pictures. On days like today when it’s around -30 degrees with the windchill it is so nice to be able to watch all the wildlife from the comfort of indoors.๐Ÿ˜Š Thank you for your beautiful post.
    Kathy from Canada.

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  2. That photo of Miguel is really sweet ๐Ÿ’•.

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  3. Greetings from Minnesota!
    I realize I’m always a day behind! I smile at this post. We are indeed surrounded by oceans of snow! Yet we never tire of the exquisite snow flakes as they come and are profoundly impacted by God’s creation and power…that no two flakes are the same. And it quiets the soul.
    I smile at your response because even though it is a regular occurrence here, we all become like children when it starts to snow! Boots, hats, mittens! I have the pleasure of a 10year old and 7 year old grandson who shout with glee when the snow comes and can’t get outside fast enough to play and slide!
    My friend Margaret encouraged me to play Vivaldi's Four Seasons when the snow flies and similar to the beautiful poetry you shared with us it matches my mood and it leads me to praise our incredible Creator! To Him be all glory and Honor and Praise!
    I’m heading down the road to fields and farms today for our final Christmas Gatherings, everything covered in a blanket of white snow! My thoughts are with you in England! May you know the peace and Sovereignty of our God in this troubled time! And enjoy His many Gifts!
    Krista Ottoson

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    1. How lovely! I feel sure you should have a sleigh with bells!

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  4. Oh for many years we did have a horse drawn sleigh rides!
    My brother in law’ Dalen, was trained by his grandfather in horses. Dalen trained teams of oxen and teams of horses for many years and we all had great delight bundling up and going through the countryside of western Minnesota. Just the sound of the horses the blades cutting through the snow and the wonder of it all! The horses Mike and Molly are gone now and the barn is filled with calving cows and I realized that chapter is over and I’m so grateful we got to share in it.
    Krista Ottoson

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    1. Wow! A real sleigh with horses! That's lucky! I've only seen them in movies and pictures...

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  5. Here, of course, you need to read a classic poem about frost and the sun. We all learned it at school (in a Russian school, I mean). I found an English translation of it.

    Winter morning

    Cold frost and sunshine: day of wonder!
    But you, my friend, are still in slumber —
    Wake up, my beauty, time belies:
    You dormant eyes, I beg you, broaden
    Toward the northerly Aurora,
    As though a northern star arise!

    Recall last night, the snow was whirling,
    Across the sky, the haze was twirling,
    The moon, as though a pale dye,
    Emerged with yellow through faint clouds.
    And there you sat, immersed in doubts,
    And now, — just take a look outside:

    The snow below the bluish skies,
    Like a majestic carpet lies,
    And in the light of day it shimmers.
    The woods are dusky. Through the frost
    The greenish fir-trees are exposed;
    And under ice, a river glitters.

    The room is lit with amber light.
    And bursting, popping in delight
    Hot stove still rattles in a fray.
    While it is nice to hear its clatter,
    Perhaps, we should command to saddle
    A fervent mare into the sleight?

    And sliding on the morning snow
    Dear friend, we’ll let our worries go,
    And with the zealous mare we’ll flee.
    We’ll visit empty ranges, thence,
    The woods, which used to be so dense
    And then the shore, so dear to me.

    Alexandr Pushkin
    translation to english by Mikhail Kneller

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