Friends, if you have read any of my stories, I'd be most grateful if you can find time to write an honest review on Amazon.
This can make a material difference to the availability of the books.
A while ago, Amazon blocked — removed from publication — my book The Hour Before Dawn, with 'customer disappointment' given as the reason.
The Amazon publishing platform seems to be run mainly by robots; correspondence proved frustrating because we were unable to determine the basis for the customer's disappointment. At all. The only thing forthcoming, no matter how we framed the question, was redirection to a page stating in general all the possible bases for customer disappointment.
So we were not able to get it reinstated. We did manage to circumvent the problem by re-publishing the same book with a different ISBN, even though we couldn't include its position in the series. If we'd indicated that it belonged to the Hawk & Dove series, on republication it would have come up not as Volume 5 (which it is) but as Volume 13. So a minor annoyance, but hey.
When we republished it, I put out a plea to anyone who had read it to come and review it, and several people kindly did. I didn't ask for positive reviews, nor would I ever, only for honest reviews.
The first of my Hawk & Dove books was written in 1989 and published in 1990, so it's been around a while! In the course of time it's garnered hundreds of reviews on Amazon. But it's been less than two years since I got back the rights to all my books so we could publish them ourselves under our own Humilis Hastings imprint. Series 2 was always and only under that imprint, but until a couple of years ago Lion Hudson was the most recent publisher to have all the books in Series 1.
The reason I had more than one publisher was because the life span of the series is so long. The first publisher of The Hawk & the Dove and The Wounds of God and The Long Fall was Kingsway in the UK, under their Monarch imprint, started by Tony Collins (my husband) as part of his vision for promoting Christian fiction in the UK. In the US, Crossway took those books, and they were the publishers who did the one-volume book of that trilogy, first in 2000, and then in a new edition in 2012.
But Kingsway stopped publishing books, and became only a music publishing business, so Tony moved to Angus Hudson, taking his Monarch imprint with him, and Angus Hudson merged with Lion to create Lion Hudson. During that time of transition, Crossway was the only publisher for my Hawk & Dove books.
Then, to celebrate that trilogy having been in print for 20 years continuously, I asked Crossway if they'd be interested in a 4th book in the series. They were, so I wrote The Hardest Thing to Do. At the time I was writing mainly non-fiction, but once I re-entered the world of St Alcuins, I just kept writing.
After more stories had been added — The Hardest Thing to Do, The Hour Before Dawn and Remember Me — it seemed like a good idea to seek a UK publisher again, in addition to Crossway in the US. Lion Hudson wanted to take on the whole series, so we did that. Not long afterward, Crossway closed down its fiction department, so at that point all the books were with Lion Hudson, and I wrote three more — The Breath of Peace, The Beautiful Thread and A Day and a Life — all published by Lion Hudson.
Then Lion Hudson went bust, and their publishing programme was amalgamated into SPCK, so all my books, both fiction and non-fiction, more than twenty titles, were now with SPCK.
Then we decided to have a go at establishing our own imprint on the Amazon publishing platform. Years ago, self-publishing was not very satisfactory; the actual paperbacks were not very well-made, not pleasing products, but that has all changed. Nowadays, the books themselves, as objects, are really nice, and because Amazon operates internationally it's easy to get the books to most places around the world. My sales are, for the most part in the US, the UK, Canada and Australia.
While we were waiting (it took a while) to get the rights back from SPCK, I'd added some more stories, and that's why there's a Series 2. SPCK could have refused to return the rights, and I thought it wouldn't be quite ethical to appear to be continuing a series for which they were the publisher. Hence the 2nd series, which has This Brother of Yours, Brother Cyril's Book, A Path of Serious Happiness, and will shortly also have St Luke's Little Summer. After that, there will be one more book in Series 2, which I've started but am a way off finishing.
Because of this long and winding road through different publishers over the course of 35 years, some of these books have a shedload of reviews, while the more recent ones have fewer — or even none (in terms of actual comments). So, for instance, the Lion Hudson edition of The Hawk & the Dove has 347 reviews, the 2000 Crossway edition of the trilogy has 204 reviews and their 2012 edition of the trilogy has 173 reviews.
Meanwhile, the books in Series 2, that were always published by us for Humilis Hastings, each have a healthy amount of reviews.
But the ones that were published with Lion Hudson then republished by us have few reviews (or none) in the new imprint. For instance, where The Hardest Thing To Do has 196 reviews of the Lion Hudson edition, it has only 4 reviews for our Humilis Hastings imprint edition. And of course, some of the reviews are just stars given, rather than a comment left.
When I started writing, I made a pact with myself and with God that my job would be to write the story and just leave it there. I would never chase sales or promotion, I would do no marketing and build no platform. I believe in the power of the hidden life, and I wanted to offer my work to God rather than to a marketplace as such. So I spend very little time looking at the numbers — I've only looked these things up now for the purposes of telling you about them.
Why it matters to have Amazon reviews divides into two reasons. The first is the simple one that, as happened with The Hardest Thing to Do, there's a risk that Amazon will simply take the book out of publication if it's not protected by good reviews. So if, for example, someone's left an unhappy review because the delivery man left their order on their porch and their dog ate it, and they left that as a product review — one star and bitterly disappointed — that could get the book pulled if there are no good reviews to mitigate their misery. And while I don't want to direct my energy to blowing my own trumpet, I do want people to at least have the chance to read what I've written, because I think it will be helpful for the development of their faith.
The second reason is that comments left by reviewers help people make up their mind if they want to read that book. I always read the reviews before I buy anything on Amazon. That's what helps me decide what to purchase.
So, if you have read any of my books, and feel inclined to leave a review on any of the ones in our Humilis Hastings imprint, that will help to keep them in print and help others to decide if they'd like to read them or not. If you're not sure which ones are our edition, you can see the covers of the Humilis Hastings editions in the side-bar to the right of this post.
Waving to you from England where it has finally stopped raining!
19 comments:
Ms. Wilcock, I am a huge fan of the Hawk and the Dove series. Huge. I’ve read the trilogy at least three times and the whole of series one at least twice. I’ve bought the book for friends and loan mine out till it’s a bit threadbare. You’re writing and the characters have taking me deeper in my spiritual life than many non-fiction books I’ve read. I truly love the characters, the place, and the struggles in victories. I am grateful these books exist. I will write a review on Amazon, but wanted to tell you something, not on Amazon. Your first book in series 2, “This Brother of Yours“, was difficult to get through because of the countless pages you gave about enemas. I wanted to know the story of the characters, but that medical procedure was very distracting. I’m not squeamish in terms of bodily functions, it just seemed to me that there was an inordinate amount of space given to the topic. As I said, I will not publish that on Amazon, but I’m afraid I am less likely to recommend that book as I have so passionately recommended series one. I just wanted you to know my honest response. I pray blessings on your writing, it has been a gift to me.
Thank you for your kindness. About 'This Brother of Yours', yes, I'm sure that some people will (like you) respond negatively. The same was true of 'The Long Fall', where I had people respond very negatively to the repeated mention of of urinary incontinence, and to 'The Hour Before Dawn' with its inclusion of the story of someone who was raped.
I have been careful to ensure that what I write (both in choice of subject matter and how I write about it) is realistic for the time period (enemas were a big thing in the 1400s!) and also is honest/real in portrayal of the actual thing.
Of course, these health matters certainly don't float everyone's boat, which I entirely accept.
It's maybe important to understand that they aren't gratuitously included, but have a particular narrative purpose. In 'The Long Fall', the urinary incontinence served to bring to the fore how helpless and undermined a person can be rendered by the onset of of illness; in 'The Hour Before Dawn', the rape is a pivotal narrative moment because the story is about *shock* resulting from devastating life events and what helps address it; in 'This Brother of Yours' the enemas are to do with the themes of going deep into a person's viscera, the interrelation of body and spirit, and the rigour of cleansing the body/soul of buried 'stuff'. The enemas are both an element of historical detail and a metaphor/image of soul process, if you see what I mean. Also, the whole series has a consistent theme of intimacy that is not sexual, and such nursing procedures offer a very helpful picture of that, and how it can be approached non-exploitatively, with gentleness and respect.
I'm not trying to persuade you to like it, just wanting to help you understand why it's included. x
Interestingly, I understood the purpose of including this in the story. It just seemed to override other important events or themes. Personal preference, I’m sure. The other two issues you mentioned didn’t bother me as their inclusion seemed necessary and enlightening. Personal preference, again. Thank you for taking the time to respond. It’s kind and I appreciate it. I love the characters and your books are responsible for deepening my love for God and others, while desiring to be a better human being. Thank you. (Is it inappropriate to ask if enemas are as prominent in the 2nd book of Series 2?)
๐ For sure it's appropriate to ask! The book that follows 'This Brother of Yours' is 'Brother Cyril's Book'.
The idea of enemas having been introduced as something they do, it isn't just dropped completely, but has prominence only in 'This Brother of Yours' where it's thematically important. In subsequent books it is mentioned only in passing.
To reassure yourself, I can suggest two options. One is that the opportunity on Amazon to read a sample before making a purchase allows you to explore quite a bit of a book before making a commitment; the second thing is that we've put all the Hawk & Dove books onto Kindle Unlimited, so if you have membership of that then you can borrow the book ad read it, not committing to a purchase unless you like it. I don't personally have membership of Kindle Unlimited, but I think it is in effect an electronic book library.
Thank you, again. I will probably still buy the books. I’m pretty brave. :))
๐ Ask Jesus. Say to him, "What d'you think, my Lord? Shall I push on with this series, or leave it right here with the enemas?" He'll let you know; because Jesus knows these stories and Jesus knows you. It's always helpful to have an omniscient master and friend.
Good Morning Pen
I have read and reread your blog concerning Amazon and the years of publishing challenges! I want to thank you for your perseverance and dedication to this work that God has entrusted with you.
Kathy said it so beautifully, I too have had three times and now the 4th to revisit these stories that hold the struggles of loving and serving God in relationship to each other as we journey this dusty road. You always bring us back to the Mercy and Grace of Jesus Christ, our Lord and Savior. And remind us to listen to Him and watch how he invites us to turn and keep walking with Him…How He transforms the way we think and see Him and all He created. My love for Him has grown deeper through the influence of these stories and the truth they hold. I also have been listening to your series for Lent, The Wilderness within You, each day. As I have a practice of having Coffee with Jesus alone early each morning, I find your style gentle and delightful. I have been bed ridden for the past week with a sinus infection and have been able to quietly listen to each message. What a Blessing! I too pray that as you invite us to go deeper into our faith and love of God, that you would be encouraged to stay the course that He has called in you! And that the ways of writing and publishing in this current world would open up unhindered for His Honor and Glory!
Your friend, Krista
Hello, Krista — waving from England! I'm so sorry to hear you've been poorly and in bed. Sinus infections are miserable. May healing come swiftly and completely. May you be completely well.
I've had a bumpy health week too — I am prone to getting blood clots in the superficial veins in my legs, and this last week brought a humdinger — a ten-inch mahoosive clot that has been very painful and proved very challenging to bring down. I'm slowly making headway with the usual things I. take for this condition, and this morning at church was on the receiving end of healing ministry. One has to be patient and persistent about seeing these things off, but I trust it has now turned a corner.
May you be well, may I be well, may we all be well!
I am halfway through reading the proofs for St Luke's Little Summer, the cover is done and looks great, Tony will be proofreading this week, and so God willing we may have it all good to go in a fortnight.
I have had so many thoughts in my head these last few days, but some things under consideration cannot be shared; even so I hope to be back to blogging in a few days, once I've motored through the book proofs. xx
Dear Pen,
My mum sadly died on Tuesday after a two week rapid deterioration in her health. I spent the last six days of her life accompanying her on that ‘great journey’ home and was privileged to be with her right to the very end.
The chaplaincy team at the hospital were a great comfort to me during this time and God answered prayers I haven’t even said. I’m meeting with team on Friday and amidst other things such as chocolates and tea bags, I purchased your book ‘Spiritual Care of Dying and Bereaved People’ for the chaplaincy bookcase. I wanted to leave a review but Amazon won’t let me ๐
I’ve read a recent comment on here that you’ve had a tricky week health wise. I’m sending you love, gentle hugs and prayers xx
Oh, San! I'm so glad you were able to be there at her side. That must have made all the difference to her. At such times when we can do so little, it means everything just to be there. As always you and the family have been in our prayers every day, and we will add in this as well. May you be comforted and upheld. May your mum rest in peace and rise in glory. xxx
Thank you Pen. I know my being with her was a comfort to her and even when she was no longer able to join in with her beloved prayers ( the rosary, angelus etc) she would raise an eyebrow or attempt to move her mouth. I thank God that she is no longer suffering and that she is at peace xx
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Dear Pen
I am sorry to hear of your blood clots! This is a very serious condition. May you Know the peace of our God as you must be patient in the healing process. I send my Love and Sympathy to Sandra Ann. It is a sacred journey to be with your mother as she leaves this earth to go Home to Heaven. I am praying for you too that you would know Gods ministry of Grace, Kindness and Hope as you grieve.
May God show Himself to each of us in our time of need. So Faithful is He!
Krista
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Dear Krista, thank you for your lovely words they are appreciated x
Good morning from Canada, I just wanted to speak God’s comfort and peace to you all. I am so thankful for His presence and love for you, may His strength and love hold you ever tighter in these times. ❤️
Kathy
God bless you, Kathy. ❤️ All a bit wild, isn't it!
Good morning from Canada ❤️, definitely Pen! I am so grateful for the gift of friends and family that surrounds us all. It sure makes all the crazy easier to bear๐
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